video from tonight's pitch :)
sorry for the middle being weird, the screen went to sleep and i was struggling to get my password in to wake it back up :/
http://youtu.be/sJiLK7CkuVU

SORRY SORRY SORRY I TOOK SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll have the rest up in a second. I have to fix them so you can actually see them!!!1

here's a couple copies of the video of our last rough pass, sorry the volume isn't very strong
the critique was an hour long, so i would just skip to your part along the bar

http://youtu.be/dHMs88fJyQc

http://youtu.be/jLOGqdlaqY8

i hope at least one of those links work
the setting is at private, so it should only be us who are able to see it

and a broadband version:
http://youtu.be/3jbvY7mlwOQ

My Character Designs

So we'll probably be doing another one of those pre-class meetings to cobble stuff together, but here are my character sketches only slightly ahead of time.

ruff overview, and size layout

okay guys here's what I've got so far:


 a basic size comparison (which I hope to have more detail put into by monday, and colored)

and an overview of the salon:

the door to the "office" is on the left, "supplies" on the right

there's just the one pedicure station, since when I was looking up reference, I couldn't find anything like that for the 50's... so Mildred's just  trying something new here

the mirror/sinks (3) are on the left, and the perm-setters (3) and manicure (2) stations are to the right

Mildred has her own station in the back, closest to the "office" and supply room

I hope to have a side view up tonight, but it looks like it might be tomorrow, sorry

50's beauty salon video

looking for reference on how they would have one set up back then, and found this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JfFvJVRcVaE
I should have a rough mock-up of the salon up here by tonight guys (Maya homework is kicking my butt)
keep a weather eye out!

here's some roughs i've got for the ending... not all of them, but what i like so far...

(1) witch: you DENSE little spawn of IGNORANCE!
(2) witch: DON'T you UNDERSTAND?!

(1) witch: you...
(2) witch: are...

(1) witch: UGLY!!!!
(2) witch: *huff huff*

(1) girl: but...but I........
(2) girl: *SOB*

(1) witch: now stop being such a cry baby.  It's not like you've ever had to deal with any real troubles before, like nobody liking you, and being bullied all...the....
(2) witch: [looks up] ...time.....

(1) [witch stares at her reflection.  girl tries to control her crying]
(2) [witch realizes SHE is a bully.  girl still crying softly]

just a test

just testing to make sure this works

beeep beep beep beep
beeeeeep

this has been a test...